Monday, May 12, 2008

Coma (Demo)

This is one of several new tracks I am working on for the new album. Still no lyrics yet, (except for a scratch chorus) but I am trying to sort that out.

The general idea is: I am fully conscious while in a coma. No man or machine can tell that my soul is still alive.

Not really meant to be as morbid as it sounds.

Coma (Demo 2008/05/12).mp3

1 comments:

Ted James said...

Just listened to this song again today. At this point my thoughts are:
- This song is too long in all the wrong places.
- The mix is too thick, I definitely need to isolate all those synth parts a little better.
- The drums just seem a little flat.
- I'm not sure it is fitting in well with the rest of these songs. I might need to move it to another release that will better compliment it.